This week I have been learning about adjectives, nouns, adverbs in writing my story is nonfiction which means its real and not fake, I tried to make my writing look neat and tidy I put a nice front on the writing and a background on my title page.
I found it easy to decorate the title page and both of the slides.
I found it hard to edit all the words and think of better ones.
Next time I will try describe the lake and my surroundings.
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ReplyDeleteHello Eli, thanks for the positive comment just wondering if you could tell me what I need to work on.
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You should make a better starting so I get more interested in you writing
DeleteHi Olivia good language in your To describe what was happening
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