Today for writing my team made a acrostic poem which I have done before a few times and I really like to do, it was cool to think of different words to use and the words have to be related to the Olympics', I found it quite hard to find words that worked for cartian letters.
Today my writing class has been learning about persuasive writing, I had to state if I was for or against the topic I am for the topic because I do think that you need to be prepared for a natural disaster I have tried to state that in my introduction.
I found it easy to plan out my persuasive writing because I know how to make paragraphs.
I found it hard to think of words that will persuasive the people reading this.
I enjoyed learning about how to persuasive people when you write.
Next time I will make my writing stuck out more to more people so when they read they will like it more.
Today we have learned about writing poetry and how to personify objects which was very interesting and was something I hadn't done that much before so it was fun to learn about it I also really like finding new ways to write and describe.
I found it easy to put the words in order and put the commas in the right places.
I found it hard to not use the same words to describe different words because the words couldn't be the same.
I enjoyed thinking about the things in the image to write about.
Next time I will make the paragraphs a bit bigger and use more describing words.
Today my class did a quick write were you only got a certain amount of time to write a story about some made up thing, we were given the sentence starter that was "as I peered inside I" and we had to write on about our made up story which was really fun to write and think about I also think I did a good job on this but I can always improve on my writing.
I found it easy to think about what I would write about and how I would write it.
I found it hard to find words that I could use to describe the words I use because I didn't know that much words that I could spell and that were good.
I enjoyed posting it to the slides because I get to add images and decrationing the slides.
Next time I will add more paragraphs to my writing.
This week I have been learning about adjectives, nouns, adverbs in writing my story is nonfiction which means its real and not fake, I tried to make my writing look neat and tidy I put a nice front on the writing and a background on my title page.
I found it easy to decorate the title page and both of the slides.
I found it hard to edit all the words and think of better ones.
Next time I will try describe the lake and my surroundings.
For the last few weeks we have been learning about persuasive writing about the environment and why the environment is our responsibility I was really happy we got this to do this topic . I found it easy to research about the environment and about pollution but I found it really hard to think of good sentence starters and to write complex words I next time I will put more evidence and i'll try get better reasons.
