Should we be prepared for a natural disaster?

 Today my writing class has been learning about persuasive writing, I had to state if I was for or against the topic I am for the topic because I do think that you need to be prepared for a natural disaster I have tried to state that in my introduction.

I found it easy to plan out my persuasive writing because I know how to make paragraphs.

I found it hard to think of words that will persuasive the people reading this.

I enjoyed learning about  how to persuasive  people when you write.

Next time I will make my writing stuck out more to more people so when they read they will like it more.

Quick Write

 Today my class did a quick write were you only got a certain amount of time to write a story about some made up thing, we were given the sentence starter that was "as I peered inside I" and we had to write on about our made up story which was really fun to write and think about I also think I did a good job on this but I can always improve on my writing.

I found it easy to think about what I would write about and how I would write it.

I found it hard to find words that I could use to describe the words I use because I didn't know that much words that I could spell and that were good. 

I enjoyed posting it to the slides because I get to add images and decrationing the slides. 

Next time I will add more paragraphs to my writing. 

Camp Kaitawa reflection and Animation.

 I reflectioned on going to camp I was writing about camp Kaitawa and making animation   I had to write in full sentences and describe my time at camp.                                                               

The year fives weren't here so we had to do it in one day and post it I didn't get the blog post finseh in the right amount of time thats why im posting it at night.

I found it easy to remember what we did at camp and write it down on the slide.

I found it hard to make the drawing in the animation because the drawing tool wasn't making the shapes that I wanted it to.

I enjoyed making the animation because I think it turned out very good.

Next time I will try add quality audio to my animation.

Fright in the Lake

 This week I have been learning about adjectives, nouns, adverbs in writing my story is nonfiction which means its real and not fake, I tried to make my writing look neat and tidy I put a nice front on the writing and a background on my title page.

I found it easy to decorate the title page and both of the slides.

I found it hard to edit all the words and think of better ones.

Next time I will try describe the lake and my surroundings. 

The Environment is your responsibility

 For the last few weeks we have been learning about persuasive writing about the environment and why the environment is our responsibility I was really happy we got this to do this topic . I found it easy to research about the environment and about pollution but I found it really hard to think of good sentence starters and to write complex words I next time I will put more evidence and  i'll try get better reasons. 

My Favorite Time of Day

Today we are learning about writing about our favorite time of day.

I found it easy to think about two of my favorite time of day . 

I found it hard to write my second paragraph and decribe the my favorite time of day.

 Next time I will write more about after school because I did not write much about that subjet.

The Fun Run

We  are learning about writeing a recount about the Awapuni Fun run.

I found it easy to describe the Fun runand and to  use averbs and use describe it

I found it hard to memorise the Fun run. 

next time I will write more words and  describe it a bit more.

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