Today we have learned about writing poetry and how to personify objects which was very interesting and was something I hadn't done that much before so it was fun to learn about it I also really like finding new ways to write and describe.
I found it easy to put the words in order and put the commas in the right places.
I found it hard to not use the same words to describe different words because the words couldn't be the same.
I enjoyed thinking about the things in the image to write about.
Next time I will make the paragraphs a bit bigger and use more describing words.
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